Lucas Pardue
Lucas Pardue
[Section 2.4](https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9312.html#section-2.4): We suggest rephrasing this sentence in order to clarify the exact minimum packet size. Does the suggested text change the meaning of the original sentence? Original: A network...
[Section 2.1](https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9312.html#section-2.1): Please help us clarify "forgibly" in the sentence below. Does it mean that packets are protected against forgery? Original: Retry packets are (forgibly) integrity protected.
[Section 2.1](https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9312.html#section-2.1): "Of" is present in this sentence three times, which may affect comprehension for some readers. How may we update this sentence for easy comprehension while maintaining technical accuracy?...
[Section 2.1](https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9312.html#section-2.1): Would clarifying actors and actions make the following clearer? Current: The Source Connection ID corresponds to the Destination Connection ID the source would like to have on packets...
Informative References: The links for the PDF and slides on the [TMA-QOF] webpage lead to 404: Not Found Errors. How may we update the reference? We have found a DOI...
Terminology: a) Throughout the text, the following terms were used inconsistently. We have updated them to use the latter form. Please let us know if any changes are necessary: Client...
[Section 4.9](https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9312.html#section-4.9): Should the instances of "PLPMTUD" in the following be "DPLPMTUD"? Original: Datagram Packetization Layer PMTU Discovery (PLPMTUD) can be used by QUIC to probe for the supported PMTU....
[Section 4.7](https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9312.html#section-4.7) and Informative References: We have updated the term "syncookies" to "SYN cookies" and have corrected its reference. Please let us know of any concerns: Original: Beyond in-network DDoS...
[Section 4.5](https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9312.html#section-4.5): We have updated the following. Please let us know if any changes are necessary: Original: [RFC4787] describes possible packet filtering behaviors that relate to NATs but is often...
[Section 3.8.2](https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9312.html#section-3.8.2): We suggest rephrasing this sentence to avoid awkward phrasing/comma usage. Does the suggested text change the original intended meaning? Original: When the sender is application- limited and e.g.,...