Section 4.5 (comment 14)

[LPardue]

Section 4.5: We have updated the following. Please let us know if any changes are necessary:

Original:

   [RFC4787] describes possible packet filtering behaviors that relate
   to NATs but is often also used is other scenarios where packet
   filtering is desired.  Though the guidance there holds, a
   particularly unwise behavior admits a handful of UDP packets and then
   makes a decision to whether or not filter later packets in the same
   connection.   

Current (changing the second "is" to "in" in the first sentence and changing "makes a decision to whether or not filter" to "decides whether or not to filter" in the second): [RFC4787] describes possible packet-filtering behaviors that relate to NATs but are often also used in other scenarios where packet filtering is desired. Though the guidance there holds, a particularly unwise behavior admits a handful of UDP packets and then decides whether or not to filter later packets in the same connection.

[mirjak]

Okay for me.