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Edit Privacy and Considerations sections

Open clehner opened this issue 4 years ago • 4 comments

Continue editing from #20 and #26, applying minor changes in sections 5 and 6.

  • Improve case (capitalization) consistency
  • Fix typos
  • Reduce use of normative-sounding language
  • Attempt to improve some wording

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clehner avatar Nov 30 '21 01:11 clehner

Looks good, thanks for investing time in improving this.

peacekeeper avatar Dec 01 '21 07:12 peacekeeper

@TallTed would you mind resolving all change suggestions that have been addressed? or lmk if you feel this is good from your perspective?

OR13 avatar Dec 10 '21 16:12 OR13

[@OR13] @TallTed would you mind resolving all change suggestions that have been addressed? or lmk if you feel this is good from your perspective?

I have no "resolve" button anywhere. Another downside to applying suggestions externally to the thread where they're suggested, instead of using the "commit" button that's right there for the PR author (and possibly others).

TallTed avatar Dec 10 '21 16:12 TallTed

I believe the requested changes have been resolved.

clehner avatar Mar 01 '22 19:03 clehner