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Replace "makes for" for "is" Replace "this field" for "data science"

Replace: One of the first features anyone who takes a look at Julia code will probably notice, is the readability it offers, By: Julia code is readable,

Replace: even more when talking about math-related computations. by: especially in regards to math-related computations.

Replace: this turns the language into a very convenient framework where to express concepts related to this field. by: this makes it a very convenient programming language to work with.

Replace:

Another interesting aspect of Julia appears if we consider the historical background of the language. Developed by a team of scientists, it comes to adress problems they typically encounter when doing research.

By:

Another interesting aspect of Julia is its syncretism, This is due to its historical background: it was developed by a team of scientists who wanted a tool to adress problems they typically encountered while doing research.

Very often, scientists are faced with complicated situations that need to aglomerate various tools and find an equilibrium point among many requirements.

• Use a verb other than agglomerate
• I'm not sure what "find an equilibrium point among many requirements" refers to, explain what it means.
• Use "Often" instead of "Very often"

that are typically just a necessary evil to build knowledge Delete this

Julia makes Julia is

being suited to implement suited for implementing (remove "being")

easily and fast easily and quickly

in an explorative process what does this mean?

and allowing to have highly performant code with some minor tweaks, and enabling users to write highly performant code with

what does "minor tweaks" refer to?

features like multiple-dispatch and simple syntax, generates features is plural, generates is singular. Use a verb other than "generate" like "allow for"

much more human much more user-friendly