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Third paragraph

Open martinacantaro opened this issue 3 years ago • 0 comments

Replace

In this sense is that this book is for Hackers: By: It is in this sense that this book is meant for hackers:

"lead you in a route" is not a phrasal verb. Use "lead you down a road".

replace "problematic situations" by "problems".

"streching" is not a word. I'm not sure what "stretching capabilities" means in this sentence. Acquiring more skills? Learning? Convey ideas with a simple and direct vocabulary.

"a priority on" is not good grammar. Use: "a focus on" or a similar existing expression (you can use linguee.com to search for alternatives)

"is an inspiration from" is not a phrasal verb.

In this context, "influence on" is better than "influence in"

martinacantaro avatar Feb 12 '21 20:02 martinacantaro