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[OSPO Book] Chapter 5 - Section - Main text (including introduction)
@germonprez has provided a draft for a Chapter 5 main text
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_ko2xz7T14hKbagnu77CB_1ggf6oSCNrnUUaU8sS_J4/edit
Request a review from @todogroup/ospology-book-reviewers @todogroup/book-reviewers Review to include:
- Does this chapter cover everything expected in the outline https://ospobook.todogroup.org/toc/ ?
- Is the content presented in a way that is relevant to our audience?
- Is the depth of coverage appropriate?
- Is the structure of the content suitable? Does it align with other chapters, particularly the OSPO Flower in Chapter 3? https://ospobook.todogroup.org/03-chapter/
@germonprez thank you so much for sending this early draft. It's a great moment to be able to give some guidance before you have the structure finalized.
I have reviewed the draft as it stands and added comments in the Google Doc you shared (link in the issue).
I appreciate that you likely did not have visibility of some of the things I have referenced in the comments and therefore with the benefit of these resources you will be able to amend your document more easily.
I have kept the feedback high level at the moment as overall the piece would benefit from some rework and restructuring that would negate any low-level feedback at this point.
Let me know if you would like any more input!