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[OSPO Book] Chapter 5 - Section - Main text (including introduction)

Open alice-sowerby opened this issue 9 months ago • 1 comments

@germonprez has provided a draft for a Chapter 5 main text

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_ko2xz7T14hKbagnu77CB_1ggf6oSCNrnUUaU8sS_J4/edit

Request a review from @todogroup/ospology-book-reviewers @todogroup/book-reviewers Review to include:

  • Does this chapter cover everything expected in the outline https://ospobook.todogroup.org/toc/ ?
  • Is the content presented in a way that is relevant to our audience?
  • Is the depth of coverage appropriate?
  • Is the structure of the content suitable? Does it align with other chapters, particularly the OSPO Flower in Chapter 3? https://ospobook.todogroup.org/03-chapter/

alice-sowerby avatar May 01 '24 08:05 alice-sowerby

@germonprez thank you so much for sending this early draft. It's a great moment to be able to give some guidance before you have the structure finalized.

I have reviewed the draft as it stands and added comments in the Google Doc you shared (link in the issue).

I appreciate that you likely did not have visibility of some of the things I have referenced in the comments and therefore with the benefit of these resources you will be able to amend your document more easily.

I have kept the feedback high level at the moment as overall the piece would benefit from some rework and restructuring that would negate any low-level feedback at this point.

Let me know if you would like any more input!

alice-sowerby avatar May 01 '24 09:05 alice-sowerby