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Solid OIDC Primer - General paraphrasing

Open csarven opened this issue 3 years ago • 0 comments

  • Language should be tightened up, e.g., "Check to be sure that" - who/what?
  • "Now" and "we" is used a lot. Consider paraphrasing.
  • Remove/Paraphrase fluff "The thing we care about here" - just say it.
  • Clarify/Cite "session storage" - https://storage.spec.whatwg.org/#session-storage ?

csarven avatar Apr 19 '22 01:04 csarven