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Atlas-class Light Armored Crusier

Open meemofcourse opened this issue 1 year ago • 26 comments

About The Pull Request

imagen atlas2

The Atlas-class is the first Colonial League ship following the CLIP Rework. The decaling and general decoration of the ship needs a revision, but otherwise, it is intended as a small, overall generalist patrol vessel to the likes of the Vaquero. The 4-Minutemen team, lead by one Sergeant, is subordinate to the First Officer and Captain, who overlook the operation of the ship by the Corpsman and the Engineer.

It is staffed by:

  • 1 Captain
  • 1 First Officer
  • 1 Sergeant
  • 1 Corpsman
  • 1 Engineer
  • 4 Minutemen
  • 1 Deckhand

Why It's Good For The Game

it's the clip ship it uses the colon league content

Changelog

:cl: add: Atlas-class Light Armored Crusier /:cl:

meemofcourse avatar Jul 25 '24 02:07 meemofcourse

CLIP IS SO BACK.

kaylexis avatar Jul 25 '24 04:07 kaylexis

it's peak chat

Martinpachu avatar Jul 25 '24 06:07 Martinpachu

imagen it has a 762 box but no guns that use 762 i think?

Martinpachu avatar Jul 25 '24 07:07 Martinpachu

there's no gravity generator!!

Martinpachu avatar Jul 25 '24 07:07 Martinpachu

i might be a stupid baby but i don't think the cargo bay doors are linked to any buttons. also no holofields ? also just my dumb gay opinion but there could be another candor mag

Martinpachu avatar Jul 25 '24 07:07 Martinpachu

image I think you forgot a couple wires for the engines here

firebudgy avatar Jul 25 '24 10:07 firebudgy

image Bridge lockdown button closes all these shutters, while the bridge windows button does nothing

image Every other ship usually has windows blocking the dorms so SSD people don't get obliterated by carps while away from their computer, so I'm just wanting point it out in case you forgot or something

image Same with the medical bay external window shutters, I'm just pointing this out in case their omission was an accident

firebudgy avatar Jul 25 '24 10:07 firebudgy

  • They don't have a single space suit on the entire ship. obraz
  • Why is it just... sticking out like that... surely there is a better way to handle it. Maybe a window into grilles? obraz
  • Most ships have shutters on the precharger. Cuz, technically, you are blocking engine output rn. (lore-wise)
  • The cargo bay has very little cargo space. I'd suggest, on the right side, making more room for a crate shelf. Also switching the air tank rack for an air tank crate, cuz it's less stationary. obraz
  • This locker has the wrong dir. obraz
  • This airlock has no controller and no vents. obraz
  • Empty space spotted. Could put a vendor or something here. Cigs never hurt anybody. obraz
  • No air pump? Also, missing cable (marked green). obraz
  • You forgot holofields, and also a shutter button.
  • Bridge airlocks don't have access req set.
  • Airlocks aren't named. Probably not needed, but still nice to have. obraz
  • You have two air cans, but no ports to put them in. Would probably be nice.
  • All of your light switches are like. Very high. Latency explained to me before, that shadow should be touching the ground. Just pointing it out. obraz
  • When those are next to each other, .i makes you speak on both, which is kinda annoying.
  • Medical lacks surgical tools.
  • There is no CLIP stamp on board.

Sadhorizon avatar Jul 25 '24 12:07 Sadhorizon

small suggestion, maybe start with a bit of glass and iron for the autolathe?

Martinpachu avatar Jul 25 '24 17:07 Martinpachu

imagen the turret panel is unreachable

Martinpachu avatar Jul 25 '24 17:07 Martinpachu

small suggestion, maybe start with a bit of glass and iron for the autolathe?

Some plastic is neat to have too! Just a lil bit, for when you need it.

Sadhorizon avatar Jul 25 '24 17:07 Sadhorizon

deleted because im stupig nevm

Martinpachu avatar Jul 25 '24 18:07 Martinpachu

imagen it has a 762 box but no guns that use 762 i think?

imagen :(

meemofcourse avatar Jul 25 '24 22:07 meemofcourse

Why is it just... sticking out like that... surely there is a better way to handle it. Maybe a window into grilles?

nah

Empty space spotted. Could put a vendor or something here. Cigs never hurt anybody.

i am avoiding vendors on the argument that this is a military vessel

There is no CLIP stamp on board.

intended for admin use. you shouldn't be able to stamp things on behalf of the entire country

meemofcourse avatar Jul 25 '24 22:07 meemofcourse

imagen cargo bay doors opens only one door. also, idk if i just didn't see it, but there should be a cell charger somewhere. since that's standard for every ship i believe.

Martinpachu avatar Jul 26 '24 01:07 Martinpachu

actually, weren't communications consoles off limits? since you can do stuff like request nuclear access codes and send announecements. i vaguely remember them not being allowed.

Martinpachu avatar Jul 26 '24 02:07 Martinpachu

is the sargeant supposed to go out with the minutemen, as like leading an away squad? if so, they should probably have at least a handgun for themselves.

Martinpachu avatar Jul 26 '24 17:07 Martinpachu

sorry for not saying all this stuff all at once by the way. i just realize some stuff later

Martinpachu avatar Jul 26 '24 17:07 Martinpachu

consider removing the curtain here, i don't think it works with the cyborg recharger sprite.

but lat did it in the panacea and nobody said anything :(

can you put warning stripes on the firelocks and replace them with directional variants by the way.

yes, but i'm not changing them to directionals because this is a door dividing a hallway and the thin ones work best for airlocks

oh no, i guess i can't perform this life-saving surgery. what a shame.

guess i'll fly into an asteroid field then.

cdn is fucked what do you want me to do

why does the first officer have so much clothing

formal uniforms to hand to the crew. you know, it's a military

meemofcourse avatar Sep 01 '24 05:09 meemofcourse

I will assume by lack of maptainer review this is ready to merge

rye-rice avatar Sep 10 '24 09:09 rye-rice

please don't until another maptainer approves it

meemofcourse avatar Sep 10 '24 10:09 meemofcourse

This pull request has conflicts, please resolve those before we can evaluate the pull request.

github-actions[bot] avatar Sep 20 '24 13:09 github-actions[bot]

@Latentish @Apogee-dev

rye-rice avatar Sep 22 '24 22:09 rye-rice

This pull request has conflicts, please resolve those before we can evaluate the pull request.

github-actions[bot] avatar Oct 05 '24 05:10 github-actions[bot]

Having some survival knives or any melee weapon really, would be nice for the minutmen as well.

DIB-DOG avatar Oct 05 '24 20:10 DIB-DOG

This pull request has conflicts, please resolve those before we can evaluate the pull request.

github-actions[bot] avatar Oct 09 '24 19:10 github-actions[bot]

recently played on this. here are my thoughts

image you should curve the railings, the middle tile that's obviously technology feels weird to stand on. image Honestly thought this was kinda ugly image don't care for the engines in this style. I think being able to see the terminals is kinda assumed. Maybe put some decalling where they should be? The steeldecal plates are good for that. First Officer and Captain should have a spare CMM bag (and imo should spawn with one, the captain bag doesn't fit them too well) image This feels somewhat haphazard Airlocks all need to be labelled image this is like. a lot of unused space imo. take some of it and give the captain a nice little front office? image spread some folders out on the tables - and put some paperwork stuff in the bridge too. image this does not look good in game image You may want to secure the blackbox somewhat image These should be SSU'd. maybe take some cargo bay space (and expand it a bit) to accomodate, or eat into the briefing area. image grav gen feels kinda just. tacked on there.

Erikafox avatar Oct 12 '24 21:10 Erikafox

thats it bitch im coming for you

meemofcourse avatar Oct 12 '24 22:10 meemofcourse

don't care for the engines in this style

What

take some of it and give the captain a nice little front office?

no

put some paperwork stuff in the bridge too.

there is a paper cutter, paper bin, photocopier, clipboard, and stamps i literally dont know what more you want. i'm not adding the clip stamp because standard individual ships should not be able to give the approval of an entire nation

meemofcourse avatar Oct 13 '24 03:10 meemofcourse

engines

I just prefer the style of seeing the terminal and having more like.. technical grunge around it

Rest is fair its your ship

Erikafox avatar Oct 13 '24 04:10 Erikafox