minor edits for content, grammar, and clarity

[secondarctic]

@riya-17 or @ritwik12 I've just suggested some minor tweaks to the content/grammar here. I think it keeps the original content and tone of what you were saying intact and helps to improve the overall sentence clarity a little.

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Please review whenever you have a moment, and if you feel these are incorrect, or not in line with your intentions, I completely understand. Thanks!