Section 1 (comment 2)

[LPardue]

Section 1: We suggest rewording this sentence to avoid awkward phrasing. In particular, "than is the case" seems out of place. Does the suggested text change the original meaning of the sentence?

Original:

   Encryption of most transport-layer control
   signaling means that less information is visible to the network than
   is the case with TCP.

Perhaps: Encryption of most transport-layer control signaling means that less information is visible to the network in comparison to TCP.

[mirjak]

Fine for me