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Typos in RFC 221 Transaction Control - Drafs

Open bjhargrave opened this issue 8 years ago • 1 comments

Original bug ID: BZ#204 From: Erwin <[email protected]> Reported version: unspecified

bjhargrave avatar Dec 11 '16 14:12 bjhargrave

Comment author: Erwin <[email protected]>

Spotted a few minor typos in the RFC 221 Draft document. I assume that most are known already but I didn't see an updated doc. in git.

  • 2.2, 3rd line: It also registers a(n) Entity Manager Factory... ('n' missing)
  • 2.2, last sentence: "Entity Manager liked pool connections could" -> "Entity Manager, like pooled connections, could"
  • 2.4.1, last sentence: This (is) called Managed Transaction. ('is' missing)
  • 2.4.2, last sentence first paragraph: "usually performed (by) a JCA" ('by' missing)
  • 4.3: Blank bullet point.
  • 5.2.1, third line: duplicate 'then'.
  • 5.2.2.4, Provider Configuration paragraph: "Each factory method here supplies (a) set...". ('a' is missing).
  • 5.3.3.1: Empty bullet point in table.
  • 5.3.4, first line, 2nd sentence: "it is also may atomic..."
  • 5.3.4, second paragraph: "... when a multiple resource are ..."
  • 5.3.4.1, first line: "... for anX A transaction ..."
  • 5.3.4.2: "... will be set to Boolean. TRUE." (extra period)
  • 5.3.6.1, first line: comma after 'gathered' should be period.
  • 8.2, fourth bullet point: 'competed' should be 'completed'.

bjhargrave avatar Dec 11 '16 14:12 bjhargrave