[2022-09-04] typo & wording in marvell-88se9230-host-controller.html

[paulwratt]

https://pipci.jeffgeerling.com/cards_storage/marvell-88se9230-host-controller.html

The Marvell 88SE9 is the successor to the 88se9130 ..

should be

The Marvell 88se9230 is the successor to the 88se9130 ..

And the SE part of those should be lower/upper according to how its written on the chip (which is not visible in any pics in the GH Issue #284 ) or any of the boards its present on.

NOTE: according to the ASROCKRACK firmware upgrade link provided by https://github.com/geerlingguy/raspberry-pi-pcie-devices/issues/284#issuecomment-1229542430 its listed as a "Marvel 9230" so maybe mention that somewhere in the text to help improve search results, and add the provided link to the firmware upgrade directly (knowing that it is hard to find, and works according to the mentioned post).

ALSO:

the comment "I'm getting .." should be change to "A user has .."

the comment ".. cards Jeff has talked about, .." should be changed to ".. cards mentioned, .." (or something similar)

ALSO: also:

does the website template allow for two (2) picutres, as the initial one was an m.2 device, which also works.

[geerlingguy]

The template currently only allows one picture... it would be nice to have more (if anything, just a list of links to additional pictures... UIs for multiple pictures are annoying to design, and I'm lazy lol).