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Improve grammar in doc/flatpak-manifest.xml

Open jwakely opened this issue 1 year ago • 2 comments

I'm not sure what the sentence "Extension define extension points in the app/runtime that can be implemented by extensions, supplying extra files which are available during runtime" is really trying to say (it uses the word extension too many times!) but I think this is better.

I'm also not sure exactly what the no-debuginfo description is saying. Please check my changes make sense.

jwakely avatar Mar 13 '23 13:03 jwakely

I'm not sure what the sentence "Extension define extension points in the app/runtime that can be implemented by extensions, supplying extra files which are available during runtime" is really trying to say (it uses the word extension too many times!) but I think this is better.

The first "Extension" is referring to the item type itself. You could probably omit it and say:

Defines extension points ...

TingPing avatar Mar 13 '23 20:03 TingPing

You could probably omit it and say:

Yes, the same thought had occurred to me. I'll push an update to the branch.

jwakely avatar Mar 13 '23 21:03 jwakely