Daniel Frederick Crisman

tour: let reader know Walk should send in order

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In "Exercise: Equivalent Binary Trees" neither the slide text nor the code state Walk() should send the values in order. Doing so in order makes using the output much more...

tour: mention generic functions in generics/1

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The first slide of generics (about generic functions) never uses the phrase "generic function". Adding to the confusion, the next slide (generics/2) then says "In addition to generic functions..." as...

tour: less confusing example in basics/7

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The code example in basics/7 (named-results.go) is confusing on many levels. The return values are not descriptive, thus offer no understanding of what function does. The paramater name (sum) seems...

tour: Reader has method not func

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Interfaces do not define func as in the current text of "Readers" ("/tour/methods/21"). The interface specifies a list of methods, just Read() in this case. It is confusing to say...

tour: Map literals less changes and text details

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Between 'map-literals.go' and 'map-literals-continued.go' there are four changes (omit element type, single line the block, add space to align the "Google" element, and remove the terminal comma in the block)...