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Proof P32-P35_P72-P75 #614 (PR 1/2)
PR 1 of 2, partially resolves #614, covering pages 0618–0631
I've left the indentation as it was in the file, using tabs instead of spaces. I've also commented out empty lines within comment blocks earlier in the file, to be consistent with the rest of the comment blocks.
I've also left the • characters as * (P3800, P4600, P4800).
Corrections made:
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Page 618
- R0011 (L32) remove extra hyphen
- R0014 (L37) remove word "TIME" not in scan
- R0015 (L38) remove extra hyphen
- R0021 (L46) (un)correct typo in scan: "FLIGHT" → "FLIGNT"
- R0043 (L79) remove comma not in scan
- Comment out empty lines within comment blocks, for consistency
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Page 619
- R0045 (L82) add missing period
- R0054 (L94) correct "BY" → "ON"
- R0061 (L103) remove extra hyphen
- R0062 (L105) remove extra hyphen
- R0066 (L114) remove extra hyphen
- R0075 (L122) add missing hyphen
- R0077 (L126) remove word "THE" not in scan
- Remove line (L131) at end of page (after R0111) not reflected in scan
- Comment out empty lines within comment blocks, for consistency
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Page 620
- R0114 (L134) remove period not in scan
- Remove empty line (L137) not in scan (after R0116)
- R0137 (L145) remove extra hyphen
- R0138 (L146) remove extra hyphen
- R01395 (L154) remove extra hyphen
- R01396 (L155) remove extra hyphen
- R01402 (L162) correct "PROGRAM" → "PROGRAMS"
- R01404 (L165) remove extra hyphen
- R01406 (L167) remove extra hyphen
- R01408 (L169) remove extra hyphen
- Comment out empty lines within comment blocks, for consistency
- Page 621 — no discrepancies found
- Page 622 — no discrepancies found
- Page 623 — no discrepancies found
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Page 624
- Add missing empty line (L325) after P1010
- R1011 (L325) correct "LOC" → "LOG"; remove extra hyphen
- R1012 (L325) correct "WHITE, P." → "WHITE.P"; correct "DATE:" → "DATE"; correct "1 JUNE 67" → "1JUNE67"
- Remove empty line (L327) not in scan (after R1013)
- R1026 (L347) (un)correct "THEREFORE" → "THERFORE"; remove extra hyphen
- R1036 (L361) (un)correct "MINIMIZED" → "MINMIZED"
- Add missing empty line (L365) after R1038
- R1039 (L368) remove space before tab
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Page 625
- R1052 (L386) remove period
- R1061 (L397) remove extra hyphen
- R1062 (L399) (un)correct "VEHICLE" → "VEGICLE"; remove extra hyphen
- R1066 (L404) remove extra hyphen
- R1069 (L408) remove extra hyphen
- R1075 (L416) replace period with hyphen
- R1111 (L424) remove extra hyphen
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Page 626
- R1112 (L426) remove extra hyphen
- R1137 (L437) remove extra hyphen
- R11394 (L444) correct "DELLVEET2" → "DELVEET2"; remove extra hyphen
- Remove empty line (L447) before R11402 not in scan
- R11404 (L450) remove extra hyphen
- R11405 (L451) remove period
- R11406 (L452) remove extra hyphen
- R11407 (L453) remove period
- R11408 (L454) remove extra hyphen; remove period
- R11409 (L455) remove period
- R1141 (L456) remove period
- Page 627 — no discrepancies found
- Page 628 — no discrepancies found
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Page 629
- P3800 (L572) correct "ADFLAG" → "AVFLAGA"
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Page 630
- P4600 (L598) add spaces to match alignment in scan
- R4652 (L603) added space to reflect alignment in scan
- 47024 (L612) left as "SXA,1" not "SXA.1"
- Page 631 — no discrepancies found
These should be corrected to . 👍
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