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Proof SERVICER.agc #636

Open KouroshSimpkins opened this issue 4 years ago • 7 comments

Checked pages 857 to 864 Inclusive, and will be continuing on SERVICER.agc.

KouroshSimpkins avatar Sep 07 '20 11:09 KouroshSimpkins

Hey @KouroshSimpkins, I didn't see the questions asked in the commit description at the time.

although unsure about how to handle the newlines in the comment block on page 869

Consecutive line breaks without a line number should be a maximum of 2 line breaks. https://github.com/chrislgarry/Apollo-11/blob/master/CONTRIBUTING.md#line-breaks

In the case of R0383 and the surrounding line breaks, that would be:

  • [tab]EXIT IS VIA Q.
  • 2 empty lines above R0383
  • R0383 itself as an empty line
  • 1 empty line below R0383
  • INPUT

as well as when there is a "+x" in the righmost column, how should they be indented?

Those should be [tab]+x[tab]INSTRUCTION. Ensure you're using tab formatting in your editor and have tab width set to 8 https://github.com/chrislgarry/Apollo-11/blob/master/CONTRIBUTING.md#formatting

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wopian avatar Oct 04 '20 00:10 wopian

Hi there @wopian, that's my bad I should've probably asked them as a comment in this PR, obviously I forgot because it was an update after I'd opened the PR.

Thanks for clearing up those questions I had though, I did think the empty lines would stack, but wasn't sure. I've implemented the changes to reflect your responses. I'll continue to update this PR as I move through SERVICER.agc, and I'll copy my commit descriptions into comments if it makes things easier?

@KouroshSimpkins Update SERVICER.agc … d6168d9 Updated Parts of SERVICER to reflect the assistance provided with reference to large comment block on page 869 and +n in margins. Will continue to move through this (hopefully at about a page per day, maybe faster.) But have exams at the moment so will be a little slow. -KS

More updates soon -KS

KouroshSimpkins avatar Oct 06 '20 10:10 KouroshSimpkins

I'll continue to update this PR as I move through SERVICER.agc, and I'll copy my commit descriptions into comments if it makes things easier?

If you need a question answered it'd be best to copy it as a comment that mentions me (I'll see it much quicker among my other notifications) otherwise the commit descriptions are fine 👍

Feel free to go at your own pace - it's a lot of pages to go through. I've converted the PR to a draft - I believe you'll be able to toggle your own PR by clicking "Ready for review" at the bottom when you've finished.

wopian avatar Oct 07 '20 01:10 wopian

@KouroshSimpkins is this still in draft?

chrislgarry avatar Dec 26 '20 06:12 chrislgarry

@chrislgarry unfortunately yes, I'm about 65-70% done though.

KouroshSimpkins avatar Dec 26 '20 23:12 KouroshSimpkins

Okay I'm now happy with what I've done in this proofing, fixed everything that I could find. Hopefully it all looks good!

KouroshSimpkins avatar Jan 06 '21 11:01 KouroshSimpkins

Thank you @KouroshSimpkins.

I took December off from Open Source development and will be back reviewing the other PRs I was unable to get through in October/November and yours this month onwards 👍

wopian avatar Jan 06 '21 19:01 wopian