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Proof SPS_BACK-UP_RCS_CONTROL #639

Open zbigos opened this issue 4 years ago • 2 comments

I've proof read the entirety of the scans for the code. I've attached .jpg files I've used for tracking the proofreading process, with some notes regarding fragments I wasn't sure about. If somebody could look at these and explain how they should be handled I'd be gratefull. 1510 1509 1508 1507

zbigos avatar Jun 10 '20 01:06 zbigos

Lines beginning with R (i.e R0007) are comments and these won't have the extra 7 columns beside the assembly code. Ignore the 7 columns entirely as they're irrelevant to us.


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The asterisk is in another column (although I'm not sure what its significance is). This is providing an example of the INHINT subroutine.

  • Column 1 is the subroutine (INHINT)
  • Column 2 is the function call (TC/CADR)
  • Column 3 is the value passed to the function call (multiple values are comma separated)

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TC	Q

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Keep the comment whitespace exactly as it is in the scans. In this case its ensuring the 2 sentences line up for GREATER THAN... and LESS THAN...

CORRECT:
IF JETS ARE FIRING POSITIVELY AND RATE IS   LESS  THAN TARGET RATE, LEAVE

INCORRECT:
IF JETS ARE FIRING POSITIVELY AND RATE IS LESS THAN TARGET RATE, LEAVE

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The line should be wrapped with a broken POSITIVE as it does in the scans.

wopian avatar Jun 10 '20 19:06 wopian

@zbigos want to give it another go? Just the few small fixes @wopian mentioned!

chrislgarry avatar Dec 26 '20 06:12 chrislgarry