Copy update on /desktop/organisations

[minkyngkm]

Blocked : waiting on a whitepaper Don't merge: can't go live until we get the thumbs up from @local-optimum

Done

• Copy update on /desktop/organisations

QA

• Go to https://ubuntu-com-11813.demos.haus/desktop/organisations
• Compare page against copy doc

Issue / Card

Fixes #https://github.com/canonical-web-and-design/web-squad/issues/5617

[webteam-app]

Demo starting at https://ubuntu-com-11813.demos.haus

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Codecov Report

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[local-optimum]

Hey @minkyngkm couple of notes:

• [x] The pricing table first column says Ubuntu Pro Desktop 'advanced support' that one should be just Ubuntu Pro Desktop
• [x] The intro sentence for Ubuntu Pro Desktop says 'premium service description' it should say 'premium service subscription' that was my bad sorry!
• [x] Please remove the NVIDIA icon from the best of open source (if we could do that one change now on the live site that would be good)
• [x] I think the rest is fine for now but just working with lech on his /pro page and might want to move our pricing table to a /pro/desktop page. Working on that idea now and will update here on if it's needed

[minkyngkm]

Thanks @sowasred2012 and @local-optimum for reviewing! I made some updates. Feel free to take a second look please :)

[local-optimum]

Thanks @minkyngkm doesn't look like the demo page has updated yet but will take a look shortly. One final request for now is that we replace the laptop image with a Dell Precision Workstation, the same one used in the Data Sheet (I think Marcus may have the original) https://assets.ubuntu.com/v1/0af12937-Ubuntu.Desktop.DS.23.05.22.2.pdf

[minkyngkm]

Thanks @local-optimum. It's been updated!

[minkyngkm]

Oliver's feedback (21/07/2022)

• [x] The logo for Ubuntu Pro Desktop has the old logo, needs updating and maybe have it on the right and a bit bigger so it's more like the live version of the page with the bullets on the left