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> From the beginning, the page metaphor provided users with a familiar language **for** which to navigate this brave new World Wide Web. should perhaps read > From the beginning,...

vishallama

Chapter 1: Eliminate comma in sentence "The spirit of modularity..."

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Change: > And that’s exactly what folks are doing. The spirit of modularity is weaving its way into every aspect of the Web creation process_, and is_ having profound effects...

frostyweather

Chapter 1: Commas in section starting "Slowly but surely..." Also, 2000's should be 2000s

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Change: > Slowly but surely these concepts found their way into web designers’ workflows. In the early 2000’s we saw the introduction of libraries like YUI and jQuery UI, which...

frostyweather

Chapter 1: Need comma in sentence "As for the 30,000..."

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Need a comma after _declare_: > As for the 30,000-page university website, it might be tempting to declare “Thousands of pages!? Wow, that sounds challenging!” New: > As for the...

frostyweather

Chapter 1: Run on sentence starting at "The reality is that..."

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Sentence seems a bit long: > The reality is that the Web is a fluid, bi-directional, interdependent medium, and as soon as we come to terms with that fact the...

frostyweather

Chapter 1: No Comma Needed in Sentence That Begins: "Thinking of the Web...."

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Don't think you need a comma before _and_: > Thinking of the Web as pages has real ramifications on how people interact with web experiences, and influences how we as...

frostyweather

Chapter 1: Pluralization in Sentence That Begins: "As we'll discuss..."

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Change: > As we’ll discuss throughout this book, the way things are named very much _impact_ how they’re perceived and utilized. To: > As we’ll discuss throughout this book, the...

frostyweather

Chapter 1 Grammar: "You turned..."

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May want to take the comma out between "them" and "and." > You turned them, and they cut your fingers. I understand if you are leaving the comma for a...

frostyweather

Chapter 1 Sentence Structure: "These contraptions..."

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May want to change: > These contraptions were heavy and bulky and made from the pulp of dead trees. To: > These contraptions were heavy, bulky, and made from the...

frostyweather

Chapter 1: Add period to "etc" in sentence "The notion that..."

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Change: > The notion that accessibility (and other principles like performance, responsiveness, etc) To: > The notion that accessibility (and other principles like performance, responsiveness, etc.)

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