Ben

> ... at the same time we're in the business of getting things documented and not necessarily producing high prose. I agree, and I see that my rhetoric is pushing...

The following some anecdotal concern that I have with using published text. Linking or deferring to to an external text, in my observation of peers, tends to discourage readers who...

>... > >If someone isn't already going to read, there's no sense in re-writing it ourselves to have it doubly not read. The linked text is (1) already written and...

> I started "Style" and "Review" sections on the [Guide to Editing Docs](https://docs.spacestation14.com/en/meta/guide-to-editing-docs.html). Comments and concerns are welcome here. thank you see change [here](https://github.com/space-wizards/docs/commit/6cfed88d672a9de683ca71c37d886a6d63f04f1a)

I am opening this in hopes that this document may receive additional feedback.

related: #152

I need to revisit FAQ.

The system example does not have a update system in it.

Added update to code example, but it may be worth splitting the sample up so that it is present adjacent to each of the appropriate sections. seeking opinions. I would...