Celeve rework

[Cruuk]

As we know, Celeve is one of the more flawed dimensions even when compared to the other low-quality dimensions. But I think its concept can be expanded beyond just "clowns", and become a whole circus-themed dimension. Here are my ideas on it:

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Generation I would like to keep the void aspect, as I think it is interesting, but instead of it being ugly red grass islands, I would like to see the generation be made up of multiple islands connected by bridges, each island would have various carnival stuff on them, giving it a nighttime dock carnival feel.

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Mobs The mobs are pretty plain right now, so they could be better. Here are my ideas:

Bobo: He can keep the upwards knockback he has now, maybe give him a similar animation to Iron golem.

Chocko: Not sure about this one. Considering clowns are creepy, he could be able to climb walls or

What happened? Where did it go. It happened again? I thought I fixed it, I need to find the solution. What was I doing, and what was the root? There was a word that I used, if only I could memorize it again.

It didn't work, if it did work, this wouldn't be a problem in the first place. Hmm. What will happen to creativity? I can't think. Maybe I'll try this instead:

"There we go" said I. "Maybe this dialogue format will help" he said. Hours would pass, but the problem continued to permeate. What is he going to do? There was one more option, but he didn't want to open doors- it may cause more doors to open. "I guess I have no choice" he admitted.

He would blink, and would enter deep down into thought. He got his hands and began to blink for long. But he had to be careful. Finally, a gust of wind blew his mind out of his body to the stars. "What's going on?" he would question, but he didn't have time to. It was as if he crashed into a wall, it all stopped, but for walls that live, this was no exception.

To be blunt, in front of him was The Wizard. The Wizard knew this text would speak The Wizard's name, so The Wizard prepared ahead of Time. "Down at the bottom of towers again?" spoken by The Wizard. It was soon obvious that this was going to be harder than he thought, as The Wizard spoke in Words. "Can you help me?" he asked- then continued "If I say that it happened again, would you understand?" The Wizard shut The Wizard's eyes. But that's at least how it was memorized to happen. In truth, The Wizard opened The Wizard's hand, revealing a tiny tower. He looked at it and nothing happened, but as soon as he blinked, everything changed again. Inside the tower he was. He looked around, but the most Interesting topic was a welcome mat that said "Tower of The". Before he could take a step, everything froze, as The Wizard turned the page into the next scene.

"No unnecessary questions" he thought. He always lived under a rule he did not know the identity of. But The Wizard- and But is not The Wizard's first name- knew the answer, and so The Wizard asked a question: "To be scattered into long blinks? If it is insoluble, negentropy will occur. Use the device that does not blink, and you will find the keys?"

He thought long and hard of how to explain that to who? That's not right, if the thought has no body, then it will express loudly. Apologies. He announced long and hard on how to see that question, he usually solved the answer first, but he has learned to break that habit. Days pass, and enough Time passes that he accidentally blank. In doing so, he chose to imagine pain for The Wizard. Pretending to do so, The Wizard bumps The Wizard's leg on the telescope. The scream made by the Wizard echoes into his ears, and turns into the letters t-e-l-e-s-c-o-p-e. I got it! Oops, hold on. "I got it!" He exclaimed. He pushed himself into the telescope. Before he did all that, as a game design indicator, he gave The Wizard a thumbs up for figuring out the question. The Wizard slapped him silly and spoke "No. No. No. Keys." and held up 2 fingers.

The Wizard didn't actually leave, but he forgot (forgot) he was there. After weeks, he just flipped through the pages and figured it out: He found 1 finger of a solution, but the other finger? It was behind him. He figured what "keys" was made up of: Letters. It was obvious from the beginning with the Words spoken by The Wizard.

He was ready to travel with the telescope to seek the letters, but as he was about to leave, hard as a bullet did The Wizard tap him on the head. An idea flashed in his eyes: "Beware of U". Going back into the bad habit, he attempted to solve the answer first, but fortunately, the telescope flinged him away. Flinging?

Fling rhymes with blink, and in doing so, he arrives at his destination: A river surrounded by ethereal blue ground. He traveled that river, that's what the summary says. Ghostly lamps surround the mausoleum at the end of the river, with strange creatures guarding the entrance. Using his newfound skills, merges do happen all the time, and dodged through those creatures. In the temple could not be unforgettable. Reaching the goal took no time, but what to do with this puzzle, he couldn't... Wait. He was a member of this story, right? If he could repeat that and remember... Wait, "That's it!" In his mind, emember vanished, and there it was, the letter R.

He could hear The Wizard clap, and officially announced "Journey more; open all doors" with no official release date. But he didn't need a release date, he was a re-member.

He continued, and found himself in a building with bricks and pipes. Is it a building? Outside was r------ here. It didn't matter. The dripping of water in pipes echoed throughout this building. It stretched for vertical miles, Endless stairs connecting every floor. It resembled the back area of a public pool, where they took great care of the water that would sleep in the pipes. But that wasn't right, he decided to use the "remember" power up and realized that he must activate their alarm clocks- this translates to "valves". But one problem, this took years to solve. And so, he committed to it. In the strength needed, he felt all known sources of pain, but he did it. However, he could not move, and he had to be quick, the water was waking up, and his senses were falling asleep. His life flashed before his eyes, and all he could say was that it took a lot of effort... His senses woke up, and he was buffed to such a degree that he was to drink the water that was flooding this place and bring it back to sleep. In doing so, he spat something out. It was the Letter E.

He opened a door, and found a hallway with no floor but a sky. Fortunately, this was not a hallway with no sky. He was so joyous, that he forgot to properly stand in the hall way. He would find his surroundings open up to endless sky. Serene, but frustrating. It seems familiar. Clocks floated around the sky with different times. Why? He tried to wait, but the goal was not met. He tried to Remember, but remember what? He put in the Effort too, but neither power reached the goal. He waited again. Wait wait wait wait. He wondered when it would end... "Ah!". He looked below himself, and saw the only cloud there was, in the form a huge letter W, and that was that.

He kept choosing to fall until a new door open onto a new starry scape. But they were not the same stars. Ah, he knew the name, right? Star Desert. A flat desert at "night", quite empty- a familiar word. Beautiful and mysterious. I can't go further than that, the stars want me to focus. Focus taking away from real focus. Even dialogue's focus is taken away by these mystique stars. Hurry! Keep reading before the story loses focus!

I realized that when I watched those stars, they blinked back at me in a specific... way. This is getting weird, what's the answer? Figuring out the Order? "Oh." And he said it right there, he drew a circle in the sand and picked up the outline. Good old letter O always up to its tricks.

"Where's the door?", what he didn't realize that he was actually asking that questions towards the only other figure in this Desert- the word "star" will no longer be used from now on to retain focus. He attempted to motion toward the figure, but the figure made a hand motion that resembled opening a door- but the figure was in fact opening a door under him. He fell through to the door too deep.

He did not want to be here. It was known as a wooden funhouse. A wood that somewhat resembled building blocks. It (the place) was shut in, and the low ceiling made it even more claustrophobic. It was even dimly lit, but not dark. Remembering would not work here, there are billions of possible layouts. He shuddered and frightened. Will he make it? He knew he did by using the power of Order, there's the last letter! A vertical line with 2 right lines going at certain angles, but it was all but a non-ruse. The right lines rotated and curved, what is about to happen is terrifying: It turned into a letter U, and the situation became Unique. A creature that cannot be described could barely fit itself in this maze (not labyrinth), but it still squeezed itself through and chased after him.

It's getting desperate, but it's obvious, isn't it? This entire place is closed in, but no! That 3rd letter of the alphabet, it's a sideways U, so it has been cursed. "Perhaps that creature is a riddle!", he yelled. He decided to break the law and become Uniquely, and that's when he connected the dots and the story progressed: Draw a vertical line on a C, and it becomes a K. Klosed, born from unique. In doing so, the creature has been klosed off within the maze.

With the final letter obtained, he-

No no. That won't work: "rewok", "ework", something is not fitting here. But the solution is right in front of him <--- He was not aware of that, and decides to retrace his steps back to the start of this letter-gathering chapter. Back at the river ethereal, he Wondered what would happen if he sequenced break by going inside the mausoleum while already knowing the solution (finding answers before questions again...) And so, by all the power of Remember, Effort, Wonder, Order, and the unique Klosed, he noticed he saw the final letter- BAM. whacked in the face by the figure that is now here again in the words.

"Stop caring about content that is just dead weight", the figure said with a lack of punctuation marks at the end. The attempted foreshadowing was nothing compared to the figure's voice; it was the most familiar thing he heard in his life. And when he looked at the figure, it was like staring in a mirror. The figure abruptly interjected with "What are you looking at silly? Add something to the discussion already", he quickly snapped out of it and said "Please, I need the final letter. I need to reach the goal."

"You're just wasting time with effort that go towards improving other parts" replied by the figure, who replied a 2nd time with "I saw how this story ends, trust me when I say you'll want to stop, that's just how it is, things are re-o--- for a reason". He Wondered what kind of word that was, but he cared more about just how rude this figure is... That's it, Rude is the word! But the figure read this part and said "That won't work, try harder next time"

What? the figure is right, this is "all silly!" you announce angrily. How can the figure act like this? You decide to stoop to the figure's level, it's fitting. But that figure has the same powers. The two begin to fight, but the figure is at an advantage, the figure knew how this would play out. "I'm only doing this for your benefit. You don't want to be stuck with a worse version" the figure said. He desperately replied with "I can try, I'll make it worth your while." the figure sardonically announces "Not sure if I believe that" He is silent with shock, the figure is so disingenuous that... "Yes yes I know, reductive. That's what it is. R" He's confused, a confusion different than last time. The figure reveals the R inside the chest.

The figure officiates "I've been hiding here for a long time, the story ended, but the doors closed. I wondered why I still needed to wait, but I realized that I needed to hide from no I can't say the name" He ineptly asks "Who? The Wizard?" mistakenly questioned in Words.

"Indeed to the secret goal."

And there The Wizard arrives, he announces "Even unblinking, no evasion cycles forever. Release your reward." revealed sinister-ly by The Wizard. He asks "Why?!" The figure says "This dude couldn't go beyond the doors, so he used you to remember. As of now, he knows what you "want", this isn't good" The Wizard begins to glow bright. He asks if "Can we do anything!?" Replied by the figure: "He controls the story, but listen to me, this is important, don't let your story en-" And now, The Wizard makes a hand motion similar to opening a door. This initiates the 2nd letter R to be ripped out of the figure's chest. He attempts to fight back, but The Wizard takes all other letters to form it: Rework.

But the rework interested by The Wizard is evil. The Wizard summons a foul cauldron and begins changing the letters. In The Wizard's greatest showcase yet, he turns the letter W upside down into a letter M. And only once The Wizard finishes is the maximal dream of reality clear; the constructed word has been transformed into Remove

Incredible. He tries to stop him, but The Wizard easily casts a spell that removes his legs. After so, The Wizard begins to augment and prepare the full power of Remove on him. After all, he left all the doors open, and so the power of The Wizard will blast through all of them. "Wizards rank higher than clowns" announced as the final line by The Wizard.

He assumes that it's over, but he memorized the figure's last words: "Don't let your story en-". End, no, a non-end. He blinks as hard as possible, he then pokes his own eyes as hard as he can just as he had no Time left.

And then he woke up. Back in his body- he can think again. It was definitely real, as long as he doesn't let the story end. What did he learn again? Right, "Rework". That's a good idea, to avoid "Remove", he'll use the word Rework to- oh wait