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Foundations ->JavaScript Basics -> Fundamentals Part 3: Sentence corrections, rephrases, and para breaks
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1. Because:
- There was a minor logical flow in a sentence.
- There was a grammatical error/ non-standard phrasing.
- There was a big wall of text that reduced readability.
2. This PR:
- Fixes a minor logical error in a sentence.
The current sentence in the lesson-
We are telling the favoriteAnimal function, “Please send ‘Goat’ to the favoriteAnimal function and use ‘Goat’ wherever the ‘animal’ placeholder is.”
does not appear to be logical. We are telling JavaScript to pass the value to the function, not to the function itself.
Another possible sentence to use here is -
"We are telling the favoriteAnimal function, to use 'Goat' wherever the 'animal' placeholder is."
- Changed phrasing from "pass value inside function" to "pass value to function" to follow the more common usage.
- Bulletin point 3 was a big block of text. Divided it into multiple paragraphs to improve readability.
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