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Subsection on active voice needs reorg

Open daobrien opened this issue 1 year ago • 0 comments

https://stylepedia.net/style/6.0/#active-voice

I suspect the entire subsection could do with a review, but this bit in particular needs a rework:

For example, the sentence, "The Developer Center, a site for reference material and other resources, has been introduced to the OpenShift website." reads better than "The OpenShift website introduces the Developer Center, a site for reference material and other resources." Here, the passive voice is better because the important issue ("The Developer Center") is the subject of the sentence.

daobrien avatar Mar 13 '23 09:03 daobrien