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Subsection on active voice needs reorg
https://stylepedia.net/style/6.0/#active-voice
I suspect the entire subsection could do with a review, but this bit in particular needs a rework:
For example, the sentence, "The Developer Center, a site for reference material and other resources, has been introduced to the OpenShift website." reads better than "The OpenShift website introduces the Developer Center, a site for reference material and other resources." Here, the passive voice is better because the important issue ("The Developer Center") is the subject of the sentence.