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Long sentence suggested fix

Open wolftune opened this issue 6 years ago • 1 comments

Act within the constraints of any agreements governing domains you are accountable for, including the organization itself, teams you are part of, and roles you keep.

That's a very long sentence. Hard to process all at once. Could be improved as:

Act within the constraints of any agreements that govern the domains you are accountable for. That includes agreements related to the organization itself, to the teams you are part of, and to the roles you keep.

But maybe the whole qualification/reminder is pedantic and excessive. I'd consider removing the whole latter part about the different levels of agreement. It's not needed in this context.

wolftune avatar Oct 04 '19 23:10 wolftune

Thanks, it's a good idea to split the sentence. I think the second part is relevant, because some readers might not be aware of the implications. I will discuss that with James and Lili when we meet next.

bboc avatar Dec 09 '20 18:12 bboc