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Published 20 hours ago • verified publisher icon LMMS

Revise README

Open regulus79 opened this issue 4 months ago • 2 comments

The current state of README.md is a bit sub-par, and I think it could really use some revising.

Critique

(some of these critiques are subjective; I don't mean anything against the person who originally wrote the readme, and I myself don't know if I could do much better)

  • It mentions a competing DAW in the first sentence and describes LMMS as a free alternative to it.
  • The first paragraph is very informal (uses "you" quite a bit, along with the phrase "You can have fun...")
  • Claims that LMMS is user-friendly and modern (The ui is great, but I wouldn't call it particularly user friendly atm)
  • Flow could be improved ("to create music with your computer. This includes..." could be revised to be more direct)

I'm not saying that I am a good enough writer to fix the readme, but what I have in this PR is at least a start.

Please please please critique me and suggest edits.

regulus79 avatar Oct 14 '24 01:10 regulus79