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Edits to BigAnimal PR5422

Open ebgitelman opened this issue 11 months ago • 1 comments

What Changed?

ebgitelman avatar Mar 26 '24 18:03 ebgitelman

@piano35-edb This overall looked very good! I think most of these edits are self-evident what they were for...Several are "goal before action." When you're reading along and it says, Do such and such to do this or that, when you get to the "this or that" it's often jarring to find out why you were doing what you're doing at the end of the sentence instead of the beginning. I don't 100% always make this edit, but generally in steps I would.

I had one query, as I wasn't 100% sure my edit was correct or if the procedure might be missing something.

I also wonder if it's necessary to include the examples that show how to use the help command. I don't think this audience would need that. I can delete them if you agree.

ebgitelman avatar Mar 26 '24 18:03 ebgitelman