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Preposition, Pronoun Agreement, and Word Choice Errors

Open FakhriAz opened this issue 5 months ago • 0 comments

https://github.com/AppFlowy-IO/AppFlowy-Docs/blob/cb1d8a02d240749c85bb75e37c96b9903393f235/essential-documentation/contribute-to-appflowy/architecture/backend/database.md?plain=1#L203

###Identified Errors with Corrections:

  1. Incorrect Phrase / Word Order:

    • Inaccurate: "to forbid the other crates directly dependencies on..."
    • Accurate: "to prevent other crates from directly depending on..." (“forbid” is not used idiomatically here; “directly dependencies” is incorrect.)
  2. Subject-Verb Agreement:

    • Inaccurate: "Each crate defines their database traits..."
    • Accurate: "Each crate defines its database traits..." (“Each” is singular, so use “its” not “their.”)
  3. Word Choice (Clarity):

    • Inaccurate: "...to meet their need."
    • Accurate: "...to meet its needs." (“Needs” is more natural and matches singular subject “each crate.”)

FakhriAz avatar Jul 21 '25 16:07 FakhriAz