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Preposition, Pronoun Agreement, and Word Choice Errors
https://github.com/AppFlowy-IO/AppFlowy-Docs/blob/cb1d8a02d240749c85bb75e37c96b9903393f235/essential-documentation/contribute-to-appflowy/architecture/backend/database.md?plain=1#L203
###Identified Errors with Corrections:
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Incorrect Phrase / Word Order:
- Inaccurate: "to forbid the other crates directly dependencies on..."
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Accurate:
"to
prevent othercratesfromdirectlydependingon..." (“forbid” is not used idiomatically here; “directly dependencies” is incorrect.)
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Subject-Verb Agreement:
- Inaccurate: "Each crate defines their database traits..."
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Accurate:
"Each crate defines
itsdatabase traits..." (“Each” is singular, so use “its” not “their.”)
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Word Choice (Clarity):
- Inaccurate: "...to meet their need."
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Accurate:
"...to meet
itsneeds." (“Needs” is more natural and matches singular subject “each crate.”)