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Tense, Article, and Sentence Structure Errors

Open FakhriAz opened this issue 5 months ago • 0 comments

https://github.com/AppFlowy-IO/AppFlowy-Docs/blob/cb1d8a02d240749c85bb75e37c96b9903393f235/essential-documentation/contribute-to-appflowy/write-for-appflowy/drafts/draft-how-to-add-a-new-property-to-appflowy-database.md?plain=1#L85

Identified Errors with Corrections:

  1. Awkward phrasing / tense mismatch:

    • Inaccurate: "on adding CreatedAt and UpdatedAt property type has got merged."
    • Accurate: "about adding the CreatedAt and UpdatedAt property types, which has just been merged." (Also pluralize “type” to “types”)
  2. Missing punctuation / clarity:

    • Inaccurate: "So when you are reading this Appflowy has these two types as a property type."
    • Accurate: "So when you are reading this, AppFlowy already has these two types as property types."
  3. Unclear subject in compound sentence:

    • Inaccurate: "I won't go through detail every specifics..."
    • Accurate: "I won’t go into detail on every specific..." (Correct “go through” → “go into”; “detail” is uncountable; “specifics” → “specific” for clarity.)
  4. Article Usage & Style:

    • Inaccurate: "but I will elaborate the parts which I think are essential."
    • Accurate: "but I will elaborate on the parts that I think are essential."

FakhriAz avatar Jul 21 '25 16:07 FakhriAz