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Tense, Article, and Sentence Structure Errors
https://github.com/AppFlowy-IO/AppFlowy-Docs/blob/cb1d8a02d240749c85bb75e37c96b9903393f235/essential-documentation/contribute-to-appflowy/write-for-appflowy/drafts/draft-how-to-add-a-new-property-to-appflowy-database.md?plain=1#L85
Identified Errors with Corrections:
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Awkward phrasing / tense mismatch:
- Inaccurate: "on adding CreatedAt and UpdatedAt property type has got merged."
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Accurate:
"
aboutaddingtheCreatedAtandUpdatedAtpropertytypes,which has just beenmerged." (Also pluralize “type” to “types”)
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Missing punctuation / clarity:
- Inaccurate: "So when you are reading this Appflowy has these two types as a property type."
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Accurate:
"So when you are reading this
, AppFlowyalreadyhas these two types as property types."
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Unclear subject in compound sentence:
- Inaccurate: "I won't go through detail every specifics..."
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Accurate:
"I won’t go
intodetailonevery specific..." (Correct “go through” → “go into”; “detail” is uncountable; “specifics” → “specific” for clarity.)
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Article Usage & Style:
- Inaccurate: "but I will elaborate the parts which I think are essential."
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Accurate:
"but I will elaborate
onthe partsthatI think are essential."