[wg/fedid] Proofread the charter draft

[jyasskin]

https://w3c.github.io/charter-drafts/2024/wg-fedid.html needs a round of copy-editing. For example, it includes

Enable federated identity while adhering to privacy principles despite the third-party cookies, a cornerstone of such operations, with the FedCM AP

[simoneonofri]

fixed by @himorin in this pull request https://github.com/w3c/charter-drafts/pull/498

thank all for the feedback

[jyasskin]

"API" isn't the only mistake in just that sentence (e.g. "despite the third-party cookies"), and there are other garbled sentences in the rest of the charter. It actually needs proofreading by a proponent, and not just me trying to point out a few things at a time.

[simoneonofri]

hi @jyasskin ok understood. I am going to re-open the issue.