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Story on "Deploy cf using bosh + cf-deployment" should give the pair a starting point

Open kquan-work opened this issue 6 years ago • 4 comments
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https://www.pivotaltracker.com/story/show/163527200 under 'How?' "Clone the cf-deployment repo to your workstation, then follow these instructions (you've already done the stemcell step, so just double-check that the stemcell versions still line up)."

---> recommend updating the description to advise the pair to start at the 'upload a runtime-config' section in the github.

Also, the instructions "We recommended that you use the one provided by the bosh-deployment repo..." ---> recommend calling out to the pair they should clone the bosh-deployment repo before running the bosh update command

kquan-work avatar Jan 29 '19 00:01 kquan-work

I also had many issues with this story (going through onboarding myself right now):

  • the story points to cf-deployment instructions, which contain 8 steps
  • because of the way those steps are written (do this, but if using bbl, do that) this is hard to follow
  • because we have already done a fair few things, almost all steps do not apply.
  • the instructions are not very clear about also cloning bosh-deployment and the command provided for that is incorrect (you have to be inside the bosh deployment directory, which changes the paths)
  • it is not clear to me what we do with the bosh-deployment

dirkjot avatar Feb 13 '19 19:02 dirkjot

@dirkjot @kquan-work Alright, the fixes I am going to make so far are:

  • including the cloning of bosh-deployment in the Tracker story so you already have it when you enter the instructions
  • set expectations in the story that the pair won't have to do all of the steps because you've already done most of them.

@dirkjot I was a bit curious if you could provide extra guidance around what was confusing about the use of bosh deployment...I'm assuming that it's step 6 in the deployment guide that you are talking about.

@heyjcollins ^ tagging you for feedback on your deployment guide

thausler786 avatar Mar 04 '19 16:03 thausler786

My plan was to write a story with all the steps in it , referring to the document only for further reference. I obviously haven't gotten around to that yet.

Your edits are great.

On Mon, Mar 4, 2019, 08:54 Tim Hausler [email protected] wrote:

@dirkjot https://github.com/dirkjot @kquan-work https://github.com/kquan-work Alright, the fixes I am going to make so far are:

  • including the cloning of bosh-deployment in the Tracker story so you already have it when you enter the instructions
  • set expectations in the story that the pair won't have to do all of the steps because you've already done most of them.

@dirkjot https://github.com/dirkjot I was a bit curious if you could provide extra guidance around what was confusing about the use of bosh deployment...I'm assuming that it's step 6 in the deployment guide https://github.com/cloudfoundry/cf-deployment/blob/master/deployment-guide.md that you are talking about.

@heyjcollins https://github.com/heyjcollins ^ tagging you for feedback on your deployment guide

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dirkjot avatar Mar 04 '19 17:03 dirkjot

Closing this issue, glad to accept more clarifying edits if people get around to it. Thanks everyone!

thausler786 avatar Mar 21 '19 22:03 thausler786