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[3][Wallet Redesign] Texts for Landing Page

Open gibbsfromncis opened this issue 6 years ago • 6 comments
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@startailcoon

I need texts for this screen - https://projects.invisionapp.com/share/VHRXABKW786#/screens

You can use my titles and descriptions as idea or update it at all.

gibbsfromncis avatar May 15 '19 12:05 gibbsfromncis

Proposed Texts for the Landing Page

Last sentence is something we could have, just a suggestion.


To enable an easier collaborative approach, the text is accessible on this google document.

startailcoon avatar Jul 26 '19 20:07 startailcoon

I think @dls-cipher and other community members would like to discuss.

abitmore avatar Jul 26 '19 21:07 abitmore

Quick overall (ill do detailed one when i get some sleep today)

  • BitShares has 'S' and its part of branding.
  • Fiat no-no, SmartAssets pegged to Fiat - ok. We hold no gateways and we offer no fiat deposits/withdrawals.
  • Telegram groups (channels are informative and new members cant post)
  • no terms such as "share" or "stakeholder" - we introduced change to term for BTS Token holder (see https://github.com/bitshares/bitshares.org/issues/88)
  • @sschiessl-bcp and/or @xeroc also place your opinion on wording/marketing according to WhitePaper from BBF.
  • @ryanRfox also opinion appreciated.

I get the idea and I like it. Content needs some polishing, for both legal and collaborative marketing reasons/efforts.

Waiting for others also to throw a comment/opinion.

P.S. Big +++++ for BitShares Network from main title!

Chee®s

dls-cipher avatar Jul 26 '19 21:07 dls-cipher

@dls-cipher Thanks for the input. I was quite sure some polishing would be expected. It's a frame of what we can go for. Lets get it working :)

Note: Did a few changes based on your input above. Awaiting further feedback.

startailcoon avatar Jul 26 '19 22:07 startailcoon

ping @dls-cipher

Do we have any requests for the remainder of the text?

startailcoon avatar Aug 06 '19 18:08 startailcoon

@startailcoon - sorry been doing overhaul on myself last one week. I'll review one more time over the weekend and write up comments before Monday.

Sorry one more time for this stretch.

Chee®s

dls-cipher avatar Aug 16 '19 18:08 dls-cipher