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Published 20 hours ago • verified publisher icon 4PrivacyEngine

Changed tonality

Open DylanMcBean opened this issue 4 years ago • 4 comments

I reworded some sentences to sound less passive and more engaging for the reader.

DylanMcBean avatar Oct 22 '21 02:10 DylanMcBean

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BrendanChambersBourgeois avatar Oct 22 '21 09:10 BrendanChambersBourgeois

Looking good!

WathikAhmed avatar Oct 25 '21 10:10 WathikAhmed

Just a tip here guys, people are watching for PR's and commits of like, actual things, so maybe we can not have 80 people debating which words to use.

TechnikEmpire avatar Oct 25 '21 21:10 TechnikEmpire

I don't see an issue with making this sound friendlier for people to read, as nothing is getting added until next year.

DylanMcBean avatar Oct 26 '21 00:10 DylanMcBean